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Tuesday 21 September 2021

My Version of GOLDILOCKS AND THE THREE BEARS

Once upon a time there was a bear family. Mama Bear, Papa Bear and Baby Bear, they wear a very happy family. They lived in a meadow full of friendly Wolves.


One day Mama, Papa and Baby Bear decided to go for a walk. They walked past the family of wolves and their many pups. Then they walked past the crocodiles. They also passed the bunnies on their to the farmers' crops.

Suddenly Mama bear and Papa Bear smelt something that smelled delicious and nice. It was a cake, it was a strawberry cake. They could smell the strong scent of strawberries on top. It was sweet and fruity, Baby Bear was delighted by the smell and immediately ran after it.

They followed the delicious smell and it led them to a little cottage. It was a wonderful sweet old cottage with brightly coloured flowers in the colours of the rainbow. It must’ve belonged to a sweet old family, the deck chairs on the porch were very welcoming and homely.

Baby Bear ran up to the door and knocked on it. He then said “hello anybody home “ nobody replied, not even one little squeak. Papa Bear said I don't think anyone is here “Me two” said mama bear . Baby bear pushed open the door and went inside. Mama bear and Papa Bear followed and they saw that there weren’t 1 or 2 but 3 delicious cakes sitting there on the table.

They sat down on the table and started tasting the cake. The family didn't know what cake to start with so the baby bear asked why don't we taste each other's cakes ok said Mama and Papa bear. Baby bear had a taste of Papa Bear's cake. It was too cold then the baby bear tried Mama Bear’s it was too sweet After that baby bear tried his cake it was just right.

Then Mama bear tried Papa bear’s cake. It was too hot. Mama bear tried baby bear’s cake it was too cold then mama bear tried her cake it was just right. Papa bear tried mama bears cake it was too sweet then Papa Bear tried baby bears cake it was too cold. They all started eating their cakes.

After the bears were tired and full, from eating a delicious cake. They felt tired so they all went and lay down on the couch. They had just gotten comfortable when somebody knocked on the door. The door slowly opened and someone said “hello who is there”. A family of humans stood outside. “I will call the cops” said one and “hurry up get out of my house get out get out” said the other. “OUR CAKES GONE” said the last one with golden locks.

The Bear Family ran as fast as they could back to home. The other family was left to deal with their home. They weren’t too mad and actually happy since they loved cooking. So it was a win-win for everyone I guess. Especially for those bears that got a delightful cake to eat.

The End

3 comments:

  1. Tena koe Zaria, I like your retelling of Goldilocks and the three bears. I like how you flipped the characters and made the bears the villains.

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  2. Hi Zaria

    What a clever twist to a classic story. I agree with Mrs Mackinlay, I like the way you have flipped the role of the characters in your story. Luckily there is a happy ending for the bear family. You are a great writer!

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  3. Thank you so much Ms Mackinlay and Mrs Lagitupu for your amazing comment. I fipped the roles around because everyone knows the classic story so I decided to change it up a bit, but I this enjoy the orginals story more because it's a classic. ;D

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