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Wednesday, 21 February 2018

The princess and the underwater castle

Once upon a time there lived a princess called Alana and a princess called Jazzman. They lived in a beautiful under water castle. One day princess Jazzman and princess Alana went to dap down into the sea and suddenly Jazzman turned around slowly. Alana was gone and Jazzman was really really really sad she was worried. Jazzman went to the old ,old ,old powerful wizard found princess Alana with his powerful magic. Then Jazzman run and hugged Alana she was surprised to see Alana and give her some water to drink and went home.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Zaria,
    I really enjoyed your story. I like the way the Alana and Jazzman were such good friends who cared about each other. I wondered where did Alana go when she went missing?
    Keep up the awesome writing Zaria.
    From Mrs Carruthers.

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